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Tempest
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since 2006-04-28
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dont eat paint chips!!!!

0 posted 2006-05-14 02:20 PM



Summer turns to winter
Since I called out your name
All this time yo could have came
But instead you decided to never show your face

You just stand in the crowd
While im on my knee's
Calling you name out loud

My lungs are torn
My death grows near
I close my eyes
And prentend to dissapear

© Copyright 2006 Bryan Girton - All Rights Reserved
cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
Posts 442

1 posted 2006-05-14 05:59 PM


ehhh... that was pretty good i guess. You could have done better.
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