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Teen Poetry #7

Melancholy Raindrops

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

0 posted 2006-05-12 11:11 AM

Shot for shot
spun in confusion
dot to dot
bond chemical fusion
   unable to hide
from the slide show of nightmares flashing in my head
draped in torn and tattered rags no soles upon my feet
No pedestal to stand on
Melancholy raindrops in pools of plighted liquid
flesh gnawed to white bone
as copasetic moments tick away to noncomplacency
To spinning sinning over winning morality slips away
  drawn in like a heroin needle
    to be injected everyday
Soapbox jerked from underneath
  face first to join the ground
careening to vivid dreaming silent screaming vocal chords
  mangled outstreched limbs
uncompassionately trampled by the hordes
Confusing musing abusing melancholy drops again
  caged beasts inside my brain
feed the magic of my pen

5-11-06

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-partially from " Slave of Love" by: Me. (posted in

pullingxthextrigger
Member

since 2006-05-01

Posts 133
MA,..USA llx

1 posted 2006-05-12 04:03 PM

Shot for shot
spun in confusion
dot to dot
bond chemical fusion

That was great!! actually, the whole poem was great!!! awesome job keep it up

~nora<3

your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong llx - P!ATD!

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

2 posted 2006-05-13 10:43 AM

I don't know what to say.. Michael.. you are a great writer.. I love your work.. keep it up..

~Heather

electricxheart
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 184
far away from home.

3 posted 2006-05-13 12:29 PM

lovelovelove it.
awesome write.
--kelly

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

4 posted 2006-05-13 03:42 PM

Thank you... you all rock. I'll do my best to keep em coming

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-partially from " Slave of Love" by: Me.

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

5 posted 2006-06-13 09:48 PM

any other comments?

" Everytime he held you close, yea were you thinking of me..." Stab My Back-All American Rejects

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