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Clear Tears
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Clear Tears |
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pullingxthextrigger Member
since 2006-05-01
Posts 133MA,..USA llx |
My tears are clear Im happy its pouring rain No one can see my tears here No one can add on to this pain My life is falling apart Everything's going so wrong I dont know where to start I dont know how i can be strong I dont need pity or sympathy I dont want you to cry with me Dont give me empathy Because you cant see Im an orphan now No where to go My heart is thumping POW! This is an all new low My friends are fake Using me all this time Crying a lake I wouldnt buy them for a dime So now where do i go from here? Im completly lost and blurred by these tears Im dying inside; blinded by my fears So go on;stare and dont care I'll just go for a walk Dont know where Dont have to talk Just need to get away from here ~nora<3 your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong llx - P!ATD! |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
That reallly good. I love how you write your poems. Keep it up! Courtney |
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pullingxthextrigger Member
since 2006-05-01
Posts 133MA,..USA llx |
thx so much for replying courtney glad you liked it and ur comment made me smile :] ~nora<3 your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong llx - P!ATD! |
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nubee Junior Member
since 2006-05-15
Posts 10 |
wow. i wish i could write poems like you. it was a very very well constructed poem ( not to be ur L.A. teacher) but i liked it alot.i almost cried over a girl i liked but then i thought how it wouldn't help. thnx for the post. i love ur poems. -thnx ryan |
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