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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
in your time of need you can count on me I will always be your friend ill b ther for you till the end last year my best friend and i made it kinda a joke, like our thing to make up little friendhip poems . its not good though we had so many!!! |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
I think that this is more like a cute quote than a poem. i believe that if you added more to it.. it could be a great piece.. ~Heather~ Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
I like it, I think it's very good. Yet, I also agree with Heather. If you added more to this than it could be a spectacular poem, I'm sure. It's very cute though and it does ring true. Thanks for sharing  @-->--- |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
we would make up stuff to add to the end of emails and we'd just like make it up on the spot. it was meant to b more of a cute piece than a poem mayb later ill post others |
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