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Act Like A Kid |
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pullingxthextrigger Member
since 2006-05-01
Posts 133MA,..USA llx |
Act Like a Kid Enjoy Being Young. Cherish it while it lasts. Because once it is over it is all in the past. Don't let other people tell you how to act look or dress. It's about how YOU feel. You have no one to impress. Enjoy being a teen. You are only there once. I know it feels like forever while you are there but in the end it feels as like it were only months. Act silly every once in a while. Make people laugh, Make people smile. But while we are waiting to grow up don't forget Have fun and every once in a while Act Like A Kid. ~nora <3 your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong |
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intention Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 59New Delhi, INDIA |
hey nice post... i do beleive in the concept of acting like a kid... impressed Love me for who i m |
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pullingxthextrigger Member
since 2006-05-01
Posts 133MA,..USA llx |
thx 4 replying your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong </3 llx - P!ATD! |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hey, Nice write, acting like a kid is coo... I don't think is one of my favorite, favorite poems by you, but it's still interesting Only thing about this poem, is i'm not sure if it was meant to be a rhyming poem or not, but if it is, it's rather stiff in parts ... nothing terrible, just stiff? Good concept though, i like how you phrase it  @-->--- |
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pullingxthextrigger Member
since 2006-05-01
Posts 133MA,..USA llx |
thx for replying stargal! i wasnt sure if i wanted it to be rhyming or not so i just did a little of both ~nora<3 your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong llx - P!ATD! |
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