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Hey baby, hey... |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
hi... sometimes i just want to be left alone but you, i never want to leave, because for you my feelings have grown. Everytime you are around me, i get a feeling that is so hard to believe. How do you make me feel so good? love again, i never thought i would. Yet when we are together, it seems, so right, so real, i have you, you have me. with each other we can be free We seem so right.. as though we were meant to be. I love you, I love you, I love you But sometimes, when you have, a love like this, so raw. You wonder if it is going to stay, you wonder if it is for sure. Yet i am willing to go through the pain for just one momment with you, One touch, One word, One kiss, One breath.. is all the loving i need from you to last me a lifetime. One momment alone with kevin, yet these feelings i wonder if i should be sharing. Love is more than just love.. love is life.. and that is why you have never enough words to describe it.. it is everlasting. i'm looking for you...always... |
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sins_and_tragedies Junior Member
since 2006-04-26
Posts 41england |
heya sat here i thought your poem was very descriptive m,y favourite line was "Love is more than just love.. love is life.. and that is why you have never enough words to describe it.. it is everlasting." i tjought that was a wicked poem keep writing i love to here rephrase that read some more of them sins and tragedies is good to face this things with a sense of poise and rationality |
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pullingxthextrigger Member
since 2006-05-01
Posts 133MA,..USA llx |
very nice...it would make a great song keep it up ~nora<3 your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong </3 llx - P!ATD! |
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