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Teen Poetry #7

darkened path

sins_and_tragedies
Junior Member

since 2006-04-26

Posts 41
england

0 posted 2006-05-01 05:49 AM

I walk along the path,
Blinded by the night,
Trying to find peace,
And my inner light.
I can feel the fear,
Growing deep inside,
I can not stop it,
Nor can I hide.
I can hear the noises,
Filling up my ears,
As I try to fight the rush,
Of oncoming tears.
Then I stumbled,
And I began to fall,
As I started thinking,
"Maybe I should end it all".
Then I was sent an angel,
From the heavens above,
The only one to comfort me,
To show me any love.
Now the path I walk,
Has suddenly become clear,
Now that I have her,
There is nothing to fear.

is good to face this things with a sense of poise and rationality

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

1 posted 2006-05-01 11:27 AM

Omgosh! All i have got to say about this is WOW! This is an amazing poem, brilliant, spectacular, GREAT!

lol... Okay, as you can tell i really like this poem, it is so going into my library

Thanks fer sharing with me

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pullingxthextrigger
Member

since 2006-05-01

Posts 133
MA,..USA llx

2 posted 2006-05-01 05:51 PM

OMG!!! THIS POEM IS UNDESCRIBABLE!!! TOO GOOD!!! AWESOME JOB!!!! <33

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