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sins_and_tragedies
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since 2006-04-26
Posts 41
england

0 posted 2006-04-27 11:28 AM



Could you be the one for me?
Could you be my find?
Could it be, after all this time,
Fate is going to be kind?

Could you be the one for me,
The one to help me forget
The man that broke my heart, my soul
The man that haunts me yet?

You tell me that I'm beautiful
Something I've never heard
But the one still lives here in my mind
That couldn't spare a kind word

It's going to be hard to forget
And pick up the pieces he left
Could you be the one to teach
How to love again and forget?

Could you be the one to come
And mend my broken heart?
Are you willing to piece together
What another broke apart?

It won't be an easy job, you see
My road has been long and rough
And the heart that was once so soft
Is now shut, locked, and tough

But I can feel my heart open again
It's opening for you
Just come in, and love me back
That's all you have to do

I must ask you one small thing
Before we kiss and part
Please be nice and kind to me
I'm tired of broken hearts


is good to face this things with a sense of poise and rationality

© Copyright 2006 Danielle - All Rights Reserved
the_girl_next_door
Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591
USA
1 posted 2006-04-27 09:43 PM


I loved this poem.. If you don't mind me asking have you is this the first time you posted this anywhere on the internet or is it on another sight? when did you sit down and write this?
~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

sins_and_tragedies
Junior Member
since 2006-04-26
Posts 41
england
2 posted 2006-04-28 11:28 AM


i sat down i wrote this i relate my poems to past experiences especially my last boyfriend who lasted a year  and a bit....that was the first time i placed it on the internet...im glad you liked it..

danielle
x

is good to face this things with a sense of poise and rationality

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