Why did you say you loved me?

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Teen Poetry #7

Why did you say you loved me?

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

0 posted 2006-04-27 12:04 PM

All my life
all my might
Wasted on the endless night
I’m to weak to breath
To weak the see that you where reaching out for me
I never know you liked me so
as more then just a friend
Now it’s to late you’ve moved away
Leaving me with this endless gap
After saying you love me
And walking away

I never know I could loss so much
Holding your picture with all my might
The one you gave me on my 15th birthday
Now I’m hoping and wishing you will come back to me
But when you never looked back
My heart gave way
Knowing there’s no you and me
Now I’m left with only monomers
of a friendship and what could have been
now I’m left in the dark
with in the night I was working for

There is so much good in the worst of us, and so much bad in the best of us, that it
behooves all of us not to talk about the rest of us.
*Robert S

Junebug
Junior Member

since 2006-04-23

Posts 40
earth

1 posted 2006-04-27 01:51 AM

ok it didnt really ryme...but i love it!! i like completely get it and i know the feeling...you like wrote down my feelings..that rocks!! its totally awesome!!

<3~Me!

Tempest
Member

since 2006-04-28

Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!

2 posted 2006-04-29 08:54 AM

That was pretty good. I liked it alot it was really cool because it really put down how you feel and i could feel the intensity.

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