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firy New Member
since 2006-04-07
Posts 8florida |
Love, Love is the strongest bond out there and it can effect you anywhere, Love gives us hope and helps us cope, For love is the only thing that can dissipitate hate And helps you find your true soul mate, Making you feel like you could reach for sky but never letting you be led astray by a lie, Love builds trust not letting it turn to lust, This is why we try, try, and try never giving in to the question of why, Love is an essence that surrounds us in awe which is why we never mind it being the law, Love picks us up after a fall helping us get back on the wall, Love is the kind of thing that makes a minute seem like hour, and an hour a minute, Sometimes love acts like a whip, but don't trip instead do a flip, Love chief |
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aliway Member
since 2006-03-05
Posts 185With in your eyes |
That was one of the best poems that describes love that I’ve read so far! I love it  I’m sorry that not that many people have posted on your poems but I hope you’ll keep posting, I love reading them. *Leah |
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sins_and_tragedies Junior Member
since 2006-04-26
Posts 41england |
wow that was really good poem i enjoyed reading it,  please write more i enjoy readng them allis good to face this things with a sense of poise and rationality |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
yes firy leah much appreciated it and leah a message to you, go for it. call, u know. but firy those feelings were expressed very well and i am sure you had a muse for that one and a wonderfull muse she is, smiles me! i'm looking for you...always... |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Wow... Like no comment here, cause there is nothing i could say that would describe in earthly words how good this is! Just keep posting more  @-->--- |
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