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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
i get depressed really fast really easy. Can you please take time out of your day to help me? I feel alone, scared, sad and mad. Why does it feel like this all in my head? I feel like commiting suicide, the next i want to find a corner and hide. Why do i feel like this all inside? Short writing and i was bored one day and just wrote this at my friends house. Some one so fake can be so real inside |
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sins_and_tragedies Junior Member
since 2006-04-26
Posts 41england |
i really like,this poem its understanding and short but sweet is good to face this things with a sense of poise and rationality |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
I liked this also, but I’m not sure I would call it sweet… When I read this I was more like, “aww, that’s so sad”, cause it is, at least to me it is… Cause I’ve been there before, and now that I’m over it, it just upsets me when people get down like that… anyway… Great write on this, short, but powerful. I really enjoyed this! PS- the title is... needs some help?  @-->--- |
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pullingxthextrigger Member
since 2006-05-01
Posts 133MA,..USA llx |
i agree with stargal--very powerful just one thing- dont commit suicide!!! this is great!!! not the feeling but the poem!! keep up the great work |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
Thanx you guys, don't worry i'm not going to commit suicide. I just get a funny feeling that maybe i should. But don't worry. i've gone through the same thing and i've tried getting through it. It's hard and i guess it came back. |
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