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LOSTinTHISworld
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0 posted 2006-04-14 11:34 PM



forget about me
forget about my feelings
the way i care about you
the way i love you
just forget about me

maybe that way i could forget about you
forget about your feelings
the way you hurt me
the way you broke my heart
i just wish we could forget

{in a million years i wont be over you}

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1 posted 2006-04-15 03:30 PM


Its really short. It's like a dark sweet tpye of poem. To me at least. The organization, grammer, and spelling is good. Nice write.

              Jessica

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