Break And A Mental Vacation

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Teen Poetry #7

Break And A Mental Vacation

sometimesitslonely
Junior Member

since 2005-12-27

Posts 41
USA

0 posted 2006-04-09 02:23 PM

Life is so exhausting,
growing tired of the people...
Those who I live with,
those who I'm friends with.

Gossip and rumors,
tears in the bathroom stalls.
Fake smiles in the hallways,
is it ever going to stop?

Stupid teenage drama,
kids constantly seeing it,
fights in school...
I need a break and a mental vacation.

This smile is fake,
These tears aren't.

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

1 posted 2006-04-09 02:30 PM

I really like that. Its awsome. I can totally realate. There is no criticism here. I love the ending.

Jessica

Haiku
New Member

since 2006-04-09

Posts 3

2 posted 2006-04-09 08:51 PM

I love it! I can totally relate.

Haiku
New Member

since 2006-04-09

Posts 3

3 posted 2006-04-09 08:53 PM

Oh wow, I copied what lateaddict said without even realizing it. :P Sorry about that; I hadn't even read her post before posting.

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