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bekahlekah45
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since 2006-03-14
Posts 533


0 posted 2006-04-05 04:26 PM


This is a bit confusing but bear with me!


I can't keep it inside
No I cant keep it to myself
I've gotta tell the world,
I'm not keeping this on my shelf

I want to tell the world
How Christ died for you and me
But sometimes I get scared
cause people call me crazy

I'm not afraid to stand up for God
Nor any of my beliefs
My life reflects my religion
I don't hide it underneath

Christ died for u and me
And rose again the third day
I can do nothing
But stand and give him praise

He loves us and wants us
To turn to him in prayer
But I notice that alot
Of us are just scared

Not me though- I'm not afraid
I want the riches in Heaven
nope, I love the Lord
and i'm proud of my religion


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aliway
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since 2006-03-05
Posts 185
With in your eyes
1 posted 2006-04-06 11:00 PM


This was a great poem.
That’s good you believe strong in your religion. I wish I could but I find myself questing him a lot.

*leah

We seek peace, knowing that peace is the climate of freedom.

*DWIGHT D. EISENHOWER*

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since 2006-02-17
Posts 523
Colorado
2 posted 2006-04-08 10:02 AM


i know how you feel Leah. my grandma is a really strong Cathlic. i belive in God just don't always think he likes me. your poem is really nice.it flows well and i don't think there are any spelling errors so its truely a nice write.

                Jessica

stargal
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since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352
OR USA
3 posted 2006-04-08 01:31 PM


Hey,

This is such an awesome poem!

Leah, Jessica, I know exactly how you both feel, but it is okay to ask questions of what God is really doing, there is no law that says you can’t Just remember even when you are mad at him he always loves you, i know that sounds so preacherish but it is true, no matter what happens.

Bekahlekah45 you have amazing talent! You have one or two spelling errors that you might like to fix.


My all time favorite line in your poem is,

“I want to tell the world
How Christ died for you and me
But sometimes I get scared
cause people call me crazy”

maybe because I can relate to this part a lot. It makes me really sad though, that people would consider you crazy just because you believe in God.

Good job, I hope to see more of your posts in the future!

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bekahlekah45
Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533

4 posted 2006-04-08 04:25 PM


Thank you guys soooo much!  that means alot. : )
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