"Here I am once again Hiding in my room I sit upon my bed Trying not to listen Trying not to hear Yet the shouts seem so near…"
With my pen in hand I wrote those words So very long ago it might seem Yet these questions still remain Along with a heart that felt pain
How could you? I was but a child I did not understand what was about to be Nor what those words truly meant, to you and to me But I could hear the anger So deep inside of you It poured out into the night upon the wings of hate…
To this day I carry scars But of a different kind Not the sort upon my skin But that which preys upon my mind
I hear the voices once again Loud and clear, angry shouts fill the air Though I can not hide upon my bed I now hide within my head Yet those voices live within me So very deep inside of me As you might one day see…
I think it's really good. Although im not a pro just trust your instinct when it comes to the ending whatever feels the best will be the best so usually i change my end about 3 times then go back to the original!
Hey Stargal, I haven't read your poem yet, though I intend to. I used to be a member on here like 4 years ago. i think my name may have been bekahlekah? idk. I can't remember for the life of me! I was thinking about your poetry recently and wondered if you were still writing! My favorite has always been silence Love it!