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Life So Sweet
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Life So Sweet |
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Sexy Member
since 2005-11-25
Posts 53 |
Every time i see your face i think of all the times we spent under the court lights all the times i thought you loved me.... Months have passed many hot boys have been in and out of my life but the one i cant get out of my mind is the man you call yourself... Many boys have tried to get with me but i refuse to go with them cause all the whole time i thought i was in love with you somethings just not right.... Now when you doute me think again cause i finally am done with you now i go with your best friend and now you want to love me well guess again.... Cause me and him got better things planned for us then you and me did im not your honeydip so let go now im his gangsta mami and life was never so sweet..... |
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aliway Member
since 2006-03-05
Posts 185With in your eyes |
Great poem Loved “now you want to love me well guess again” the hole poem, I couldn’t have say it any batter Great work *leah |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
aliway is right. i loved it, curiouse Curioustity is a fine gift... |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
The line that Leah pointed out was also my favorite. The end of the poem could have flown better. I can't explain how really it just doesnt sound right when you read it. Jessica |
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