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Teen Poetry #7

where i wanna be

xox.ice.cream.lover.xox
Junior Member

since 2006-01-07

Posts 20
Canada

0 posted 2006-04-02 11:51 AM

A fantasy, a dream;

Free of despair¡

A vision, a reverie;

Just take me there¡

Won¡¯t analyze this again,

Won¡¯t care about the past-

Don¡¯t care if it¡¯s temporary,

If it¡¯s real, if it¡¯ll last.

A separate world;

With no doubts, no lies¡

A delusion, a paradise;

With no goodbyes¡

Embraced by your laughter-

Yet feeling so free¡

Lost in your smile-

That¡¯s where I want to be.

curiouse
Member

since 2006-03-21

Posts 277
england

1 posted 2006-04-02 12:19 PM

loved it
curiouse

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

2 posted 2006-04-02 03:03 PM

If only life could really be like this...

Great poem, i think you captured a little part of all kinds of people, and put them all together into this poem. It's a beautiful thing.

Thanks for sharing this with me/us.

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latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

3 posted 2006-04-02 07:32 PM

enjoyed. i have to agree with stargal, if only real life was like this.

Jessica

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

4 posted 2006-04-02 11:35 PM

i loved this poem.. actually i had a thought similar to this for a poem but i have to be in a writing mood to write a poem.. and i had this last line.. where i wanna be and was gonna be talking about with a guy in a way but i just couldn't get all my feeling to write it down.. very nicely written..took the words right out of my mouth..

~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

5 posted 2006-04-03 12:05 PM

Great poem
I agree with stargal, I wish it was.

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