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Sexy
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since 2005-11-25
Posts 53


0 posted 2006-03-31 05:38 PM



I got a thing for baby
boy cause at the end of
the day its me and him
against the world.....

Hes down for what ever
he been hurt i've been
torn hes been there and
i went there.....

He fights all them boys
that call me names he
loves me and he told me
he would never leave me...

Now hes here and its me
and baby boy against
this world....


~to my boo Shaq~

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stargal
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since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352
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1 posted 2006-03-31 05:53 PM


It's nice... The title reminds me to much of Ushers song though..

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Cherishable_Baybee
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since 2006-01-04
Posts 57

2 posted 2006-03-31 06:00 PM


Don’t Underestimate Me
By: Cherishable_Baybee

Before when people use to walk pass me
I use to look down to the ground
So lost and confused
Trying to figure out how I was
And how much my life was changed
Since I walked away from my family
I lacked a great deal of confidence
And self-respect
People said I was going to be unsuccessful
Ugly, and lonesome
Doomed to be a doormat for people to step on
But they always underestimated me
Now, they fear me
They fear my beauty, my self-confidence, and my happiness
Now when they walk pass me they look down to the ground
While I look them in eye
With happiness and joy
I did not treat them the way they treated me
I showed them curtsy and hospitality
I did not break into a historical laugh when they pass by
I did not show them disrespect
Although they underestimated my power
I did not return them to favor
Now they learn their lesson
To never underestimate people
Whether people are old or young
Man or Woman
You should never underestimate the power of a human being
Because it funny how karma can bite you right back

Cherishable_Baybee
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since 2006-01-04
Posts 57

3 posted 2006-03-31 06:05 PM


Wow im sry i was going to say i liked your poem but instead i posted my poem lol but its a great write and it doesnt matter whether its a title of a song
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Colorado
4 posted 2006-04-08 09:52 PM


I like both of your guys poems. The both are very good. It does remind me of Ushers song titled My Boo. That doesn't madder though.

                    Jessica

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