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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
Hey, It’s so good to see you and there is so much I have to tell you, but wait, you start first... |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Umm, don’t really understand this either, sound like the start of a conversation though? It's interesting? @-->--- |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
yes....your meant to finish the conversation off... |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Oops… Well, hi to you I don’t really know who you are but, I have read some of your posts and I enjoy them! How are things in England? Kind of rainy over here… I feel like a dork  @-->--- |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
yeah lol, well i am having a blast in england, it's nice and sunny and i'm having a party next week, curiouse |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Rub it in why dontcha! Send some of that sun over here, im about to drowned with all this rain! Party? parties are fun, how come you didn't invite me?!?!?! MEAN What part of England are you from? or is that something i shouldn't ask... @-->--- |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
so i'm supposed to finish off the conversation? no offence, but whats the point in that? oh no! that probaly sounds really rude. i dont mean it like that. that is probaly the shortest thing i have ever read on this website. nice write even though i dont get i think its good. Jessica |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
hey.. well i thought this was a great piece.. the way i see it.. i wasn't really thinking that i was supposed to write you back and finish the conversation.. although if it was meant to be that it wouldn't really be a poem.. there is a poem here though.. to me this is what it is saying.... it's like the old movies or the books where the guy has something to tell the girl, and the girl has something to tell the guy so one of them is like.. you start first.. and something get's said that makes the other person change their mind about what they were going to say.. so this poem made me think about how sometimes people take things for granted.. and you shouldn't always wait for someone to go first cause then your feelings might get changed and they'll never know how you realy feel bc of something they said.. but sometimes it can be a good thing bc it can stop you from saying something really stupid.. so really.. this poem.. sets up a contradictory conversation.. i can see it one way and someone can see it another.. i guess now i feel kinda stupid bc.. this poem meant so much more to me than it did the others.. i loved it.. made me think about some stuff that i've really been wanting to talk to some one about.. Keep it up.. loved it..  ~heather Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Now i feel like double dork, cause Heather is probly right  @-->--- |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
no, your all right! you can all Interpret this piece the way you want. and stargal you can come to my party if you want ! as long as you have got a plane ticket and can get here by saturday and then you can share the sun with me. i live in the north east of england. oh and heather i love your take on it, that is a way that i felt about the piece. latte addict you don't have to get it and not meaning to be rude but a piece of poetry does not have to be the longest to be th best. thankyou all for your comments, curiouse Curioustity is a fine gift... [This message has been edited by curiouse (04-03-2006 09:30 AM).] |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Aww, your so nice! i'm actually babysitting this week or i would be there! :P hope ya have fun @-->--- |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
thankyou stargal, i'll save some cake for you and hope you enjoy the baby sitting, curiouse |
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BlackEyedBueaty07 Junior Member
since 2006-04-05
Posts 27rittman, ohio |
mmmm...im not too sure what this means... maybe continued? -kerry- |
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