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God Im The One |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
who can make the sky so blue? who can make the sun so bright? who can make the moon glow at night? only you God, only you can do these wonderful things you heal people from head to toe you walk with them in good times and bad you hold there own very hand across the sand across the hills you are with them through night and day you are the wonder I seek each day you are my night in shining armor that is soon going to lead my way you are the one who got down and gave me my first rose you are the one who wants to get close but I am the one who is afraid im the one who has lost my way im the one who lives by myself each day the one that thinks that I will be okay im the one who wishes it to go away and I stumble and fall into another game im the one who wants you bad but im the one who is to afraid im the one that prays at night im the one who lives with fright im the one who wants to hold your hand but there is something stopping me something holding me back oh how I wish I could figure it out just don't let go of me now just stay with me till I figure myself out im scared that you will try all you can and I will be 50 and still looking for your gracious hand I love you Lord and I hope that this will all work out! x0x0 |
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BlackEyedBueaty07 Junior Member
since 2006-04-05
Posts 27rittman, ohio |
i have no clue why poeple arent posting for this or reading it! this is very good! i think maybe people started to read it and they saw the word 'God' and thought it would be boring. but i am a christian, its hard to belive because my poems, but i am, and this is a very good poem and i think that people are rude for not readin' it -kerry- |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
I'm a cathlic, but I would read poems with the word God in the title even if I wasn't. Cause how can you judge something without even reading it yet? Don't judge a book by its cover....or title. Yuor poem is real nice. It flows well and is organized well. Jessica |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
yeah im 100% Christian. I wish i had read this sooner but i've been gone for awhile. this is an amazing poem. Great write. and I foudn that i related it in some ways. thanks for posting that. well done! bekah |
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