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Teen Poetry #7

In your sleep last night...

acid_tears_i_cry
Junior Member

since 2005-11-25

Posts 24
United States, UT

0 posted 2006-03-30 11:26 AM

ITs getting so much harder,
not thinking is hard anymore...
I made a fool of myself today at skool...
No body noticed...
I had the hardest time breathing ...
I cant be without him, I cant be without a lot of things...
I dont want to suffer from sharp tears anymore...
I dont want the heavy feeling to come back again...
It just seems...so...Hektic...I want to be as simple as a typed text on a computer screen...so simple and easy to delete...I just cant be without him....
By: Malinda Peterson

Can you read the word "loneliness" and not think of a dark room?

curiouse
Member

since 2006-03-21

Posts 277
england

1 posted 2006-03-30 12:58 PM

great write,
with truth i know how ur feeling,
curiouse

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

2 posted 2006-03-30 11:16 PM

I know the feeling also.. I'm there now.. scared of losing someone.. i can't be without him.. great job.
~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

3 posted 2006-04-09 02:43 PM

I've never felt how your feeling. Your poem Is good. A few spelling and grammer errors. Nice write. Hope to read more.

Jessica

Haiku
New Member

since 2006-04-09

Posts 3

4 posted 2006-04-09 08:49 PM

Quite a few spelling and gramatical errors, but otherwise it's perfect. I know exactly how you feel. ^-^

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