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Cherishable_Baybee Member
since 2006-01-04
Posts 57 |
Breakaway By: Cherishable_Baybee Tired and wreckless of this life I lead Always longing for a way out All fainted out of this wretched life I just want out No more falling to pieces no more breakdowns I just wanted to be free of this life I no longer want to be incrassated by you I want a life of my own A life that is full of love, trust and faith No longer ashamed of whom I am I want to able to scream to the to my lungs Sings harmonious songs and be able of live I don’t want to slow down and settle I don’t want my name to be forgotten Just intend to live life to the fullest People’s thoughts and actions may seem important to you But I don’t give a damn of what people say I am me and I wish to me I don’t want to ruin my life like you have done You let foolish people run your life What matters to them is important to you But remember I don’t care what the world has to say I run my own life I don’t let them deceive me Their mischievous acts don’t fool like Like they have fooled you I see right through them Thousands of times I’ve tried rescuing them and yourself But they do is pull you farther away from me and closer to them I know this is true But I still believe that you can reach out and be saved You can be unplugged and live your life to your best ability You can give your own advice and opinion And just breakaway |
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aliway Member
since 2006-03-05
Posts 185With in your eyes |
WoW... great poem. I feel that same way. Theirs a guy I know that’s just like that. I wish he would think for himself |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
This could almost be two poems! It is amazing together though... At first I thought this was a poem just about you, I saw though, that this was also sort of about your friend? Umm... I kind of think stanzas would be nice, but i think that this works either way  This line "I want to able to scream to the to my lungs", I'm not sure what that is supposed to mean? Could you please explain? Good job though, i enjoyed reading your poem @-->--- |
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Cherishable_Baybee Member
since 2006-01-04
Posts 57 |
Thanks guys for saying that my poem is great When i say,"I want to able to scream to my lungs" no longer want to be underestimated by all and i just want to be heard. // - Cherishable_Baybee - // |
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