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curiouse
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since 2006-03-21
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england

0 posted 2006-03-26 09:45 AM


Hey,
I tried to talk to you yesterday but you blanked me.
I tried to sit next to you yesterday but you said the seat was taken.
I tried to call you yesterday but you said you had to go.
It seems that you’re all doing that these days
Is it me?
Did I do something wrong AGAIN?
Do you just not want me anymore?
You know, it’s getting frustrating,
I have to keep all these feelings inside of me
And day-by-day they keep growing and growing inside of me
And each day I have the longing to be anywhere but here.
I see you everyday and you’re a great person...
Or do I want you to be a great person,
do great people blank me,
talk behind my back
and give me looks even
and then you go and call me your'e friend.
Am I just thinking and believing in that great person you used to be?
And the thing is that I have to be with you no matter what.
Because if I don’t then you’ll make my life hell.
But don’t worry I’m not going to leave you,
You’re going to leave me and
I’m going to be sunk in depression even more than I am now because I can’t run away from this,
Either way you’re going to win.

© Copyright 2006 whatever you want it to be - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2006-03-26 11:00 AM


they only win if you let them...

first of all if your friends( or those you call your friends are ALL ignoring you)and if you have done nothing wrong..then maybe it is time to find new friends but you can't chase them down.

You have to be the best YOU that you can be and those new friends will eventually come to you...or reach out to you. Remember that when you hang in groups you exclude others..so that when it happens to you, you get to taste what it is like.

I have been reading a few of your poems and I think rather than let yourself be upset over this..you need to find new activities, meeting new people and remember that what is happening to you from these so-called friends is not what you want to do to others.

There is happiness out there...

M

curiouse
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england
2 posted 2006-03-26 12:17 PM


thankyou sooo much,
appreciated,
Curiouse

aliway
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since 2006-03-05
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With in your eyes
3 posted 2006-03-26 01:53 PM


I agree with nakdthoughts
I’ve been there, believe me and it’s not easy.

My friends stared to not talk to me and give me looks. Eventually they got more of my friends hating me and I didn’t even know why. So I stared hanging out with new and old friends and tried to find out why they hated me. Now I have two great friends because of that fight.

So you should find new or old friends to hang out with, because something good things can come from bad situations like this. I hope that I’ve helped you in so way.


curiouse
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england
4 posted 2006-03-26 03:05 PM


thankyou, you have helped a lot it's just that i am a really shy person and i don't know if i'm confident in my self enough to go out there and leave my current "friends" to find others

aliway
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With in your eyes
5 posted 2006-03-26 09:17 PM


That’s no excuse not to look for new friends. I mean I’m very shy and quiet and it’s really hard for me to make new friends because I’m too afraid to. You could talk to you’re old ones or people that you know or be like me you can mostly lysine to them in till you get comfortable to talk to them.

With you’re friends, I don’t think there you’re friends if there treating you that way. And if you’re not comfortable with living you’re so called friends then stand up to them, I did with my friends when they did this to me and as I said “I’m shy too.”


curiouse
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Posts 277
england
6 posted 2006-03-28 10:23 AM


so do you think i should talk to them about it but thing is i'm worried that they may say something like "well your doing this and that wrong"and point out my faults or tell others.i think by not talking about it i'm growing further apart from them.and also sometimes i feel like i'm making excuses when writing back to you and others and i'm sooo sorry for that. i appreciate your help. thanx
Curiouse

aliway
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since 2006-03-05
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With in your eyes
7 posted 2006-03-28 12:55 PM


Yes I do! If you don’t know what you did, then you can’t solve it. Talk to them and if they walk a way then don’t balm you’re self because you were trying to fixes it and they wouldn’t lesion. So if that happens then there not good friends because they would have helped fix it.                
Go find new friends to be with, that are better!!

Remember this when doing it, because it’s helped me out a LOT.
“It doesn’t mater what others people think of me, but what I think of myself.”


curiouse
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england
8 posted 2006-03-28 02:45 PM


thanx,
I'll get back to you,
curiouse

aliway
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With in your eyes
9 posted 2006-03-29 01:16 AM


I hope it goes well and hope what I said helps you out with you’re friends and in life.
So tale me how it goes

See you later



curiouse
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england
10 posted 2006-03-29 11:07 AM


i'm gonna do it...tomorrow

[This message has been edited by curiouse (03-30-2006 07:08 AM).]

aliway
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With in your eyes
11 posted 2006-03-30 09:27 PM


That’s great!!!  
I hope you’re friends and you work it out
Get back to me with the result

Best of wish’s to you.


curiouse
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since 2006-03-21
Posts 277
england
12 posted 2006-03-31 10:07 AM


hey,i did not talk to my friend but they all have started talking to me like nothing happened probably because i was off from school for a couple of days  yet i'm relieved that everything is o.k again.thnkyou soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much you do not know how much you have helped,aliway a special thanx to you for without you i would not have gotten through this and everyone else..
curiouse

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