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curiouse
Member

since 2006-03-21

Posts 277
england

0 posted 2006-03-26 09:24 AM

I thought I had lost everything,
I thought that life could not get any worse,
I thought that the world was a mean, deceitful and miserable place,
I was in hell,
Until I was in heaven
I’m on cloud 9 and still flying high
The world is such a giving and wonderfully beautiful place
I have everything I ever I wanted,
I’m overjoyed with laughter
And I could never be any happier
Because I found you.
I found joy,
And I found happiness,
I found life
The moment you came over to me.

(i so wish this happened to me)

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2006-03-26 10:55 AM

You are young..it will happen ..be patient

M

curiouse
Member

since 2006-03-21

Posts 277
england

2 posted 2006-03-26 12:19 PM

thankyou,
i guess i just have so much craving for life,
curiouse

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2006-03-26 02:19 PM

and that's a good thing...just be patient, you have a whole lot of living ahead of you...
and much fun included in it.

hugs
M

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

4 posted 2006-04-01 12:36 PM

I feel like this poem is so hollow, and i realized why, afterwards when you said you wish this had happened. I agree with the other person who posted, you are young, good things will happen, and bad things. You just have to get back on your feet afterwards.

I hope you find the happiness you are looking for.

@-->---

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2006-04-01 11:12 PM

Like everyone else has said, give it time and it will happen.

~Alli~

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

6 posted 2006-04-03 01:21 AM

i agree with all of ya. you guys post such nice things.

Jessica

curiouse
Member

since 2006-03-21

Posts 277
england

7 posted 2006-04-03 08:07 AM

thankyou for your caring words and advice guys
i enjoyed it
curiouse

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

8 posted 2006-04-12 10:07 PM

In agree with them
but you now have someone so it did happen to, I think
I’m so lost

*Leah

curiouse
Member

since 2006-03-21

Posts 277
england

9 posted 2006-04-13 04:44 AM

yes i wrote this poem a while back and it has happened to me thankyou

i'm looking for you...always...

Free_Spirit07
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 222
The middle of my mind!

10 posted 2006-04-17 06:54 AM

interesting. was not rhyming really...sorta had a weird flow....but i liked it

and me being me ... was mean and im SO sorry...coz poems actually don't have to rhyme. it was well like i said interesting...in a GOOD way that is..lol

cya round!

x0x0
Free_Spirit07
~%#*So far from perfect!*#%~
~%#*So far from life and living!*#%~

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