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my best friend
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my best friend |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533
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Dedicated to my best friend steph *The one I laugh with The one I cry with The one I talk with The one I'll die with* She helps me through things I didn't think i could make it though She builds me up in everything And never hold back on the truth She corrects me when i'm wrong And supports me when i'm right And she's first to say i'm sorry After having a bad fight She's my best friend Theres no denying the fact We'll be friends forever and that is that ehh...so this isnt the best...but it tells everthing i feel and wanted to say so im happy! |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
I really like this! I have a best friend just like this and for years i've been trying to describe her... I'm glad someone found out how to express their emotions for friends like this. I'm not sure why you didn't think this was one of your bests, I can find nothing I do not like! Thanks for sharing This is one for my library! @-->--- |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
thank you! i appreciate that! |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
i wish i had a friend like that, i did but then i lost her to others, great write though, really good, curiouse |
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aliway Member
since 2006-03-05
Posts 185With in your eyes |
I think it was great. I agree with stargal, I can’t find anything wrong with it. I have two friends like that, I don’t know what I would do with out them  |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
thanks guys! Yeah shes the best friend in the world! the least i could do was make a poem for her! |
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