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Xeonox
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0 posted 2006-03-25 02:11 PM


How I wish for the day, when the Sun shines just for me?
My love, that is all mine, stays with me throughout the night,
She holds me tight, as I hear her breath silently beneath the moon light,
My world is her and I am her, for a minute apart, we miss each other a lot,
Call it obsessed love, but we are a perfect pair, two peas of the same pod,
In her heart, I have come to settle, and my soul she has come to call her home,
The years we’ve spent together, are a vacation in paradise, each moment blessed with a kiss,
She showed me to believe, and to love, never to give up on either one, not now, not ever,
What dream binds us together, that I never wish to be waken again?
For without her, life is but a clock killing time, counting down the years.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2006 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
curiouse
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1 posted 2006-03-25 03:15 PM


everything you write is about love....
great poems but i do have a request...could you write something on a different subject cause that woule be mindblowing, wonderfull post though,
curiouse

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2 posted 2006-03-25 03:29 PM


I have poems in Corner Pub forums, Dark Poetry forums, Spirtual forums and so on. Look at the archive and you will see that I have written about love, hate, fear, seasons, God, people, events, poverty, time, abstract topics and so on...

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

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