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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
I wanted to talk to you, I wanted to laugh with you but most of all I wanted to see your smile. yet, when I came for you, you weren’t there, you were there physically but that smile, that personality, that special touch wasn’t there. It was lost. Your now a different person, you don’t admire me like you used to, you don’t notice every little thing about me. Like you used too. Your lost. and because your lost, I’m lost, I’m lost because I want you back but there’s no “you” there’s just this body. Why do you not sway the way you used to, why do you not look at me with those intimate eyes anymore? I don’t love this body, this new person I don’t know them. My soul is lost with yours. I want the old “you” back but I don’t think I can ever find you again, The worst thing of all is that I don’t think you want to be found. I don’t think anyone wants to find you, but me. Find me, please |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
it's so sad when that happens... *my only suggestion? spell checker...  |
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byski Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 235Alberta, Canada |
I like to believe in past lives and how we meet the same people over and over again. Mabey you will meet another version of this person in the form of another body. Or at least something close to. Good poem by the way, I like your style. |
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byski Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 235Alberta, Canada |
I like to believe in past lives and how we meet the same people over and over again. Mabey you will meet another version of this person in the form of another body. Or at least something close to. Good poem by the way, I like your style. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Oh wow, I can relate to this so much with my friend. You really summed up all I'm feeling.  ~Alli~ |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
thankyou so much guys and alli, i'm going through the same thing with my friend aswell.looks like were in the same situation...curiouse |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is a double post...you already posted this in open under the title find me now... a different title doesn't change it from being a double post. Please read the guidelines regarding double posting. |
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