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Just a dream...
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Just a dream... |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533
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Running and running I just can't get away. I try to be faster But they're starting to gain Screaming and screaming I call for someone to help! I look behind me and see them take off their belt Help me! Help me please! I cry at the empty world. No one can hear me Everthing is starting to swirl Get up! Get up NOW! A stranger calls to me I open my eyes and realize it was just a dream... I get these weird dreams that peopl run after me and try to hurt me with belts lol. so i made a poem out of it just for kicks. |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
hey, it's cool that you can come up with a poem about your dreams! half the time i try and it ends up in one BIG mess! Good job  @-->--- |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
Yes this is interesting! i have tried to write my dreams into poems too.....but it comes out a BIG mess as well! its awesome that you can put your dream and feelings about it into this..  *thumbs up*x0x0 |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
lol thanks. i love writing about random things! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Pretty random poem, and I thought it was cute. Well not cute that people are trying to hit you with belts, but the fact that you're able to write a poem about your dreams. I thought it flowed well. ^_^ ~Alli~ |
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