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broken friendships |
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helenadepp Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 59durham, england 
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I'm sorry that i hurt you but we all have our regrets Now it's gone so far why bother with attempts? When i said i missed you tell me what you heard You walk away from me is the notion that absurd? I know your in a herd but i was in there too Now im the outcast what are you going to do? When you laugh at me i wonder if thats real Treat me like dirt is that really how you feel? Well i can only try dont beat me for caring Im gunna be here for you am i wrong for daring? Throw everything in my face I'll keep it in a box They're memories atleast do you care that im lost? |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I really enjoyed this poem because I can relate with it. I think the last stanza was really good. Hope to read more poems from you soon!  |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
This is a great poem! I really like the 1st,2nd, and last stanza. I can relate so much to this poem. I loved the whole thing! Keep writing~ @-->--- |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Like the way you write. Wish they were not so sad. Miss your work. Do keep writing. I hope things are looking up for you. martyjo |
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