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Free_Spirit07
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since 2006-01-29
Posts 222
The middle of my mind!

0 posted 2006-03-17 06:59 PM



Shivers when will my life change?
when will it stop feeling strange?
when will it go away?
when will I have the right of way?
when will I finally find a light that can light my way?

when can I stand up and say that I've had enough
and ask what I have done to get so caught up and to keep looking back

what does true love mean?
coz if you think about it its sort of like the wind
you cant see it but you can feel it
its like your blind and then it hits you from behind

can people read you face?
can they see what fears you face?
can they say that they know?
and not have any ideas of why they just told you so, when really they have no clue and then you start thinking that they where rude

im blind I have so many questions
but sadly no answers so I will wait
and hopefully find my own way!


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Free_Spirit07    
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aliway
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since 2006-03-05
Posts 185
With in your eyes
1 posted 2006-04-19 11:47 PM


I love your poem. Why no one has posted on it, I have no clue.
I think of those same questions sometimes. I don’t think there is a answer to them.
I love how you compare love to wind.  

*Leah

intention
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since 2005-11-13
Posts 59
New Delhi, INDIA
2 posted 2006-04-20 02:45 PM


really really good.i read it aand re-read it ...

Love me for who i m

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