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Sexy
Member

since 2005-11-25

Posts 53

0 posted 2006-03-11 10:33 AM

You lied to me when you said you would always be there..... You lied to me when you said "I love you.".... You lied to me about being with me for ever...... And me being a fool belived it...

The boy i fell in love with and this fake person thats now here are two diffrent people....You never did the things you do now.... You just changed over night you used to be honest and could look me in the face..... But now when we speak you lie and look away..... every time you do it you start to cry.....

You think I dont see it that i think your fine.... You tell me that i changed but really its you...I sit home wanting to die cause the boy I still love isn't the same he's being a jerk he's being a fake person..... I miss the boy that i know and love and i want this fake person to disapear...

byski
Member

since 2006-01-26

Posts 235
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2006-03-11 10:51 AM

Hey, havn't seen from you for a while. Good to see your still kicking around but not so good concidering your post. I just hope to see more, and one more thing. How can someone change so drastically overnight? It can't happen that fast.....

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2006-03-11 11:33 AM

actually, they can change over night, well at least it sure seems that way. Maybe it was just him, showing his true colors and you were just seeing it for the first time?

Either way, I thought this was good.

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

3 posted 2006-03-11 11:58 AM

wow... it's kinda bitter!
Ummm, it's nice? intersting? uhh... idk :S
Good job for expressin' u'r emotions as you feel em?

i should just shutup now...

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latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

4 posted 2006-03-11 12:10 PM

i think instead of putting a whole lot of ......'s you could just move it down to the next line. that way the page wouldnt seem so clustered. just a sugjestion. the poem the meaning all of it is very real and very true. things can just happen over night.

           Jessica

    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

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