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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Even though there is a God How do you believe in something you can’t see? But deep, deep, down I feel like I believe… Why am I so confused? Why is this pain so hard to refuse? Though I run I can’t hide This pain is always deep inside Yet I have the pain I feel so empty, so empty deep inside… Without hope Without dreams Without something, anything… What’s wrong with me? @-->--- |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
nothing's wrong with you. for beliving in something you cant see i guess you just need faith in what ever you try to belive in. the lines went realy well with each other. Wonderful write.  Jessica |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Thanks Jessica  @-->--- |
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SiIIy New Member
since 2006-03-11
Posts 2Canada |
Hey Stargal - feelings is feelings, iz ok to feel dis way, sometimes. I don't hav da answer to the pain u feel inside, but He does... The hard part is forgivin urself and accepting it as a part of the u who u are... Just one thing tho... promise me? Don't ever ask urself dat question, "What's Wrong Wit Me?" ever again!!? Cuz it makes ya focus on the stuff that's not healin, ya kno? Mmmmk, g2g...32stargal!  ~ |
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SiIIy New Member
since 2006-03-11
Posts 2Canada |
Hey Stargal - feelings is feelings, iz ok to feel dis way, sometimes. I don't hav da answer to the pain u feel inside, but He does... The hard part is forgivin urself and accepting it as a part of the u who u are... Just one thing tho... promise me? Don't ever ask urself dat question, "What's Wrong Wit Me?" ever again!!? Cuz it makes ya focus on the stuff that's not healin, ya kno? Mmmmk, g2g...32stargal! ~ |
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mgoodman1989 Member
since 2006-03-05
Posts 93Iowa, USA |
I think just about any teenage girl can relate to this poem. Bravo! You seem to know how to express yourself in a way that anyone can relate to. Keep writing. I really like this piece. Michelle |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I feel like this too sometimes. Keep writing.  ~Alli~ |
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