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aliway
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since 2006-03-05
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With in your eyes

0 posted 2006-03-07 07:55 PM



You think of me
as one of the guys
I don’t know why
I don’t play any sports
I don’t talk guy

should I dress all in pink?
talk real sweet
dance really slow  

then will you see
I’m not one of the guys
I’m one of those girls
you ask out on a date




[This message has been edited by aliway (03-07-2006 10:30 PM).]

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1 posted 2006-03-07 08:40 PM


guys can be so stupid sometimes. to all the guys out there i said sometime not all the time only sometimes. i have been friends with the male gender my whole life and when they started see us girls different. they got all different. i got used to it eventuly. i dont think that its fair that you should have to dress up to get their attention. start to hang out more with ur girl friends then when they notice your gone they might, i reapeat might, notice some other things also. i dont know if this is to muh i was only trying to help. i really do like your poem. it nice and short and not difficult to read. good job

           Jessica    
            
    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

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