One More Day - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

0 posted 2006-03-05 05:49 PM

Just to hold you close,
say everything I want to say...
just to know you're there,
well there's always one more day.

Sweet words fall from your lips,
that take my breath away...
wishing for this moment,
there's always one more day.

Searching for the words,
that I'm dying to let you know..
guess I'll have to wait,
for that one more day to show.

Keeping all my secrets,
in my heart and far away...
Looking in your eyes,
there's always one more day.

Laughing at the jokes,
taht mean so much to me...
but one more day I guess I'll wait,
for the time you finally see.

One more day to hold to,
one more moment to shed a tear...
one more day to laugh,
and one more to show a fear.

One more wish to make,
as I hope for one more day...
but if only it could be,
tomorrow's yesterday.

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

byski
Member

since 2006-01-26

Posts 235
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2006-03-06 02:22 PM

I'm sure there are more people who can relate to your writing more than me. But I feel as if are going through the exact same thing, and you took the words from my mouth. The last line about looking forward to yesterdays twomorrow is such a strong discription of how if must feel. I like your quote at the bottom too.

helenadepp
Member

since 2006-01-16

Posts 59
durham, england

2 posted 2006-03-06 03:06 PM

This is beautiful! It has a lovely flow throughtout....*Hugs* this one's going in my library

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

3 posted 2006-03-06 08:52 PM

i just figured out that when you highlight a smiling smiley it turns to a frowning smiley. good poem. i like the way you added "...." to the end of the second line in each stanza. thats cool.

           Jessica
              :)
    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

4 posted 2006-03-06 09:33 PM

Hey..

THanks for all your comments.

Byski, I can read your writing and read mine and I agree not as much relation in the writing but it seems like some of the feelings are similar.
Thanks for the comment..

~heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.