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Teen Poetry #7

Lonely

sometimesitslonely
Junior Member

since 2005-12-27

Posts 41
USA

0 posted 2006-02-20 09:02 PM

I know I've got some work to do,
but I don't think there's no getting over you,
not this time.
What are scars if they don't bleed?
Why stay if it means I've got to leave?
If you no longer love me then,
I think maybe you should go,
take the highway to where?
God only knows.
Because I hate seeing reminders of our old love,
on the ground and broken up.
Maybe it's best,
if this converstation ends,
forget being friends,
because I know the effects of your love.

Lonely,
you were,
you've been,
my one and only.

This smile is fake,
These tears aren't.

Free_Spirit07
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 222
The middle of my mind!

1 posted 2006-02-20 11:50 PM

I love this, nice flow

x0x0
Free_Spirit07
fear and tears....STOP rounda bout here!

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

2 posted 2006-02-21 11:36 PM

its very good. i like it. your poemflows very well.

            Jessica
              :)

       Where your heart lays
        is where you belong.

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

3 posted 2006-02-27 06:24 PM

I loved this. I can relate. When someone says they want to be just friends it's hard because you know just seeing them reminds you of what you had. It sucks in reality.
Nice write

~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

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