The girl you tried to replace

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tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

0 posted 2006-07-08 07:00 PM

Just walk away from the girl who loves you,
You've become so good at running, you know just what to do.

Turn and walk away, ignore everything I plead and cry,
cause you know you couldn't run away from the sadness in my eyes.

Keep on running until I'm not longer in your sight,
cause who knows, you might run back after a lonely night.

Then you'll find my replacement, the kind that make you forget
the girl you left behind, so you have no time left for regret.

You'll fill your time full of things with her, anything to make you feel better,
just remember to tell her that your "true love" won't last forever.

There'll always be something missing, something you can't quite trace,
And one day she'll give up on trying to be the girl you tried to replace.

You'll come crawling back, say you realized that your love was true,
but I'm sorry to tell you baby, that I won't always be waiting on you.

The stars burn out one day, the moon will be dull in it's shine.
and I might be crazy, but one day I won't fall for your every line.

You might come back looking for me after being gone for so long,
and you never know, baby, you might be suprised to see I might have moved on.

myspace username-beautiful_tragidy
I just want to find my way back to you...where love is strong and feels brand new.

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

1 posted 2006-07-08 11:25 PM

nice flow, very very good.
nice write. i cant see anything at all i didnt like. it flowed so well .

i can relate, but more in the sense, i have had friends(not boyfriends do this) leave me, to hang with the popular kids, then when those people dump them, they come crawling back.
a girl who i used to idolize(emphasis on the used) kind of deserted me she was a good friend, then things went to pieces with her friends and she had alot of stuff going on, she tried to come crawling back to me.
i told her no, and we fought then after like 2 months of fighting, i called her said i was sorry and basically goodbye. we ended the friendship, sadly. that is what happens.

off topic sry. but i loved your poem. very good. cant wait to see more.

rhia

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

2 posted 2006-07-08 11:58 PM

Another wonderful write by you Erin... GREAT, GREAT write.. I look forward to everything by you... you always amaze me and leave me speachless...

*tear*

Waiting eargerly for your next post!

~Heather~

ps-going in library!

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

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