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ShelbyLynn13
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0 posted 2006-02-18 01:19 AM



what is my real life you say?
maybe iam what i say.
honest truth i had a baby girl when i was
twelve.
my aunt threatens to throw us out but never does.
i feel very insecure.
my heart was stolen as a child and was never given back.
i was married but he is never around i am only 16.
people may think differently about me but i am proud of my dissition because i didn't give her up or murder her!
tell me what you think! and think hard do you think it is true or not?

every one is special in their own  way!!!

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latteaddict213
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1 posted 2006-02-18 01:15 PM


if its true then Im glad you made it through.
If its not then ...I don't know.


By the way you spelled decision wrong. Just saying.

[This message has been edited by latteaddict213 (02-18-2006 06:14 PM).]

ShelbyLynn13
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2 posted 2006-03-21 11:05 AM


no it is not true. i might as well tell you because it looks like nobody liked this poem!

every one is special in their own  way!!!

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3 posted 2006-03-21 07:08 PM


I just went "wow" thinking that this poem was real.  I'm so relieved to know it's not, but it must be horrible for someone who is actually in this situation.

~Alli~

stargal
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4 posted 2006-03-23 12:17 PM


Just what Alli said! The whole time i was reading this i was thinking "more power to you". It is so sad that some girls are looked down upon because they do take that chance and make that choice NOT to have an abortion!

This was a great read.
keep posting

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curiouse
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5 posted 2006-03-24 02:53 PM


in a way,i'm kind of relieved it's not true,sorry
great write,
curiouse

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