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Belinda
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0 posted 2006-02-16 04:31 PM



I want to be able to tell you,
There is something you need to know.
I'm not sure if you are aware,
But this boy has got to go.

I'm saying this because I'm your friend,
You could do so much better.
I don't want to look back and think,
"She fell for him, and you let her"

He only wants one thing,
To this you seem totally blind,
I know it must be hard for you,
But this "lover" is messing with your mind.

It might seem like the real thing,
As though without him you can't go on.
The truth is that you're a strong girl,
I'll be there when the road is long.

Here I am when you need me,
I'm not going to tell you what to do,
You can learn from your mistakes,
But I am here to help you through.

For My Best Friend, I Only Mean Well.

Belinda xx

© Copyright 2006 Belinda Black - All Rights Reserved
ShelbyLynn13
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since 2006-02-15
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1 posted 2006-02-16 07:23 PM


WOW!! ive been in that same predicament. when my friends fall for the wrong guy and your not sure how to tell them! only because you are afraid that they will get angry. but that isn't a reason not to tell them.

every one is special in their own  way!!!

Free_Spirit07
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since 2006-01-29
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The middle of my mind!
2 posted 2006-02-17 02:44 PM


Yes same here! Its hard but maybe, maybe she does need to learn from her mistakes ... think of it as when she is older she will remember how hurt she was and think harder! Hopfully that is what will happen...and im glad you are there for her "good on ya"

x0x0
Free_Spirit07    
fear and tears....STOP rounda bout here!

helenadepp
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since 2006-01-16
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durham, england
3 posted 2006-02-17 03:05 PM


This has a really good flow to it well done!
byski
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since 2006-01-26
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Alberta, Canada
4 posted 2006-02-17 04:17 PM


Yeah it's true. U gotta let her make her own mistakes and let her learn from them. Your main focus is to support her as best you can now and when that time finally comes let your loyal friendship shine. U never know, it may just be all in your head unless you have concrete proof.
XxnoraxX
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5 posted 2006-02-17 10:46 PM


This is awesome-flows great and i just luv it- u r soooo talented- ur friend should be happy u care for her so great job for caring   yea so keep it up!

XoXo,
XxnoraxX

No ones perfect;just perfect for each other-<3

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6 posted 2006-02-18 12:20 PM


I have TOTALLY been in that spot I know how you feel


Belinda
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7 posted 2006-02-18 10:42 AM


omg thanks for all the comments wow ! xD lol! i know this guy really is no good, everyone does she just doesn't seem to see it. I had a party and he took advantage of her, she can't even remember what happened and yet she still "loved" him. She really could do SO much better! It hurts to just have to watch, but mabye it's for the best. At least when she does find out she will learn and I'll be here xD lol that was long ! hehe !

Belinda x x

the_girl_next_door
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since 2006-02-26
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8 posted 2006-03-01 06:10 PM


hey.. I loved this poem. I wrote one almost similar to this but I might post it later. I loved this piece honestly.

and I hope to hear more.

~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

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