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Free_Spirit07
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since 2006-01-29
Posts 222
The middle of my mind!

0 posted 2006-02-03 05:36 PM





im left again in my stupid little game
and keep landing in a pool of pain
i stand up only to fall down again
i guess that life is just the same

i try so hard to make people understand
but i still think that they don't get the things i say
so im left again
when they have done all they can,
just for them to tell me that they MIGHT have a plan

it hurts to know now that people think i must be going insane
that they don't get me and my ways
but its life that has taken over now
i have no say,
i have no way,
i just keep walking and think about the things that might come in the way
hoping it will be better the next day and that i will start to lead my own way
but every time you think your life might of changed
it turns around and hits you right back in your face

so wake up Athena,
im never going to win!
its ova,
just throw the dice,
and start all over again...

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XxnoraxX
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since 2006-01-24
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1 posted 2006-02-03 11:33 PM


This is such a good poem.  Life is kinda of a game sometimes.  When we die, we have reached the end.  Make a bad choice in life and you have lost.  Excellant job!

XxnoraxX

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