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Free_Spirit07
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The middle of my mind!

0 posted 2006-02-02 12:25 PM



do you think its easy to walk away?,
to say that i am ok each day?,
do you think its easy to wipe away,
the tears that i have cried today?,


It must be in my dreams,
that in the end,
i'll be ok,
that all the tears,
will finally stop,
and some how fade away,


coz im telling you now,
it doesn't get better,
live today like it will last forever,
and remember that there is always a way out,
never live your life in doubt,
it hurts to much and its harder to found the best route out,

smile n laugh,
love life while it lasts!


PLEASE let me know what you think good or bad!


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XxnoraxX
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1 posted 2006-02-03 04:44 PM


Woah, awesome poem.  So true too.  Some people just waste their life but hopefully soon everyone will know just how precious life is.  Excellant job!

XxnoraxX

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2 posted 2006-02-25 09:13 PM


wow! to true people can be so selfish! very nice write

            Jessica    
              

       Where your heart lays
        is where you belong.

the_girl_next_door
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since 2006-02-26
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3 posted 2006-02-27 06:08 PM


I loved the way you put this all together & I agree it is very true.

*Everythings ok in the end & if it's not ok... It's not the end!*

~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

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