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Peach Junior Member
since 2002-11-17
Posts 33 |
I am stuck in this spot not knowing what's going on I keep trying to get out but I don't know where to go how can I run away if I don't know where I am? don't want to be here don't know how to leave it's like an endless stream of unanswerable questions a map with no destinations I don't know if my eyes are open or closed am I deaf or just hearing things? is someone with me or am I alone? anger, torment, sadness and rage someone pay the ransom or could I just escape? am I even being held captive or could I walk right out the door? I scream out loud I beg, I plea but no one comes to my rescue because everyone is trapped like me they're trapped in realization If you don't stand for something, you'll fall for anything. |
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byski Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 235Alberta, Canada |
Wow. It is very imaginative. The perspective, I mean. I think that sometimes we all can be prisoners of our mind. Very well written. |
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XxnoraxX Member
since 2006-01-24
Posts 122<3 MA,,,USA <3 |
This poem is rly deep and awesome! keep it up XxnoraxX |
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Peach Junior Member
since 2002-11-17
Posts 33 |
I really appreciate the comments...thanks so much!! |
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