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byski
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0 posted 2006-01-30 07:38 PM


"So what do we have here?
A red, a black, a high, a low.
This ones good to go.
Hmmmm...... This crowd is quite a steady one. I need a glance or stutter and I'm there. I find myself glaring across the table, calculating my next moves. Who can I take advantage of?

!!!

Wait, there it is. My victim turns to his right and leans on his left, throws me a stare.
"ALL IN!", he says.

Alrighty then! The game starts now!

Ever had your heart race? Enjoy the feeling of those natural highs? Those who live, thrive on it. Those who merely exist deny it entirely. I prefer the euphoria of challenge."

All before me fall, and all behind me have FEAR clearly written in Giant Bold Blood-Red Letters on their foreheads. My turn has come and I take the initiative.

Funny after all the battle fought and wars won it comes down to just plain blind luck.

Want to know who wins............?

Unorthodox mabey, but I grow on you.

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1 posted 2006-01-31 02:58 PM


Actually while reading this I didn't think anyone really won.   Instilling fear in anyone has got to be the worst thing that there is one can do to another human being, in my opinion only.  

A well written story poem - so who did win then?

"There's nothing worse that being an aging young person!" - Richard Pryor
~ Carpe' Diem ~

byski
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2 posted 2006-02-01 12:05 PM


Well actually I havn't got that far but we will find out soon. Thanx for the comment.
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3 posted 2006-02-18 02:14 PM


when will you figure out who won we're all very curious

Where your heart lays is where you belong.

Free_Spirit07
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4 posted 2006-02-18 03:12 PM


Yeah we are....cant wait any longer.............. hehe

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fear and tears....STOP rounda bout here!

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5 posted 2006-02-18 09:42 PM


This is GREAT--the suspence is killing me i have to know who won!!!

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