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blaxx
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since 2006-01-21

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Australia

0 posted 2006-01-21 04:55 AM

"Next partner"

Thanks Paul. See ya
My heart stops. It's him. Next.

"Let's do the ballroom waltz"

[Groans]

I smile.
Perfect timing Mrs Woods.

My hand entwines into yours
The other on your shoulder
Your other on my waist

"You have to get close, then it's easier to be in time together"

Great.
Awkwardly but willingly
You draw me in,
I draw you in

We smile, and talk
I'm from New Zealand.
You're my neighbour.

Oh no
I feel sweat on my face
I must look like a shiny freak
I want to wipe it off
But you don't seem to be looking anywhere
But my eyes.

"Next partner"

No! Not yet!

I have no choice

See ya.
Hey Cameron.

I look back
You're smiling.

My heart skips a beat.

Feel the love generation

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Saluting with misty eyes

1 posted 2006-01-21 09:23 AM

This is a GREAT first post!!!!
I could actually see the dancing as it happened.

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Canada eh.

2 posted 2006-01-21 09:36 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
I so much enjoyed your first post.
I know you are going to love it here.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

blaxx
New Member

since 2006-01-21

Posts 8
Australia

3 posted 2006-01-21 05:50 PM

thanks for the warm welcome guys!

Feel the love generation

tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

4 posted 2006-01-26 10:11 PM

welcome to pip great first post

intention
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since 2005-11-13

Posts 59
New Delhi, INDIA

5 posted 2006-01-29 04:35 PM

grt first post..very different idea

shilpii

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SincerelyYours
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since 2006-01-29

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6 posted 2006-01-29 08:25 PM

Wow...This is Really good. Great first post, I was very impressed with the imagery in this. Well Done.

Sincerely Yours,

XxnoraxX
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since 2006-01-24

Posts 122
<3 MA,,,USA <3

7 posted 2006-02-02 04:52 PM

This is really good. I could see the picture in my head perfectly. great job

XxnoraxX

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