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Just Take The Fall
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Just Take The Fall |
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sometimesitslonely Junior Member
since 2005-12-27
Posts 41USA |
In this state of emptiness, I smile to the sun, the sunrise slowly fades, the now has begun. The shadow lines the celing, I'm feeling less alone, and my heart just doesn't stop beating, no matter how close to home. Life is lonely without you, but I grow used to all, sometimes it's best, just to take the fall... This smile is fake, |
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to*sing*is*a*work*of*art New Member
since 2006-01-18
Posts 6 |
Hey! I like your screename, I can really relate to it! Lol... Your poem was great. I like the fact that the rhyming wasn't boring. The poem was creative and interesting. Good work. I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future! |
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