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littlelauren
Junior Member

since 2005-12-30

Posts 25

0 posted 2006-01-04 02:18 PM

Why are you so afraid
of showing me who you are
why are you so fake with me
why do you keep putting up a bar

I would like to get to know
the real you
so stop being such a coward
and let me know what you do

I've know you now
for quite a while
only the fake you
who tells me nout
I can't take this no-more
I want out!

Show me the real you
and I promise I will stay
but unless you do
I have to call it a day!

helenadepp
Member

since 2006-01-16

Posts 59
durham, england

1 posted 2006-02-06 03:33 PM

hey. I knew someone like that..they either let you in or they dont but dont give up on them. Great poem,reminded me of my own past. Keep up the good work!

XxnoraxX
Member

since 2006-01-24

Posts 122
<3 MA,,,USA <3

2 posted 2006-02-06 04:08 PM

Uh...I hate when people act so fake. Why cant people just show the real side of them, I'll never know. Well, im not gonna bore u so...THANKS FOR THE POEM!!! keep up the great work!

XxnoraxX

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

3 posted 2006-03-07 09:25 PM

its so stupid! the being fake part not your poem. Why cant people just show how they really are? there should be a limit to shyness. ejoyed reading this

           Jessica

    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

4 posted 2006-03-08 01:06 AM

A limit to shyness? I admit that being fake is dumb! But there are some things where for the sake of not hurting other people you have to be…

On to the poem though, it was very nice.
Expressed a lot of how you feel about people sometimes, which I think is good.
When a writer can convey their true feelings through to the reader so that the reader understands, it shows true talent!

One quick thing though, what is, “who tells me nout”, “nout”, what does, “nout”, mean? I keep thinking it might mean, “no”, but I am not positive.
Can you enlighten me on the meaning?

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