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littlelauren
Junior Member

since 2005-12-30

Posts 25

0 posted 2006-01-03 04:03 PM

Why are you so mean to me?
I never done anything to you
so why do you call me fat
it affects me mentally

It plays over and over in my head
I pretend not to hear
but the words cut into me like a knife
so just leave me alone
and let me live my life

Everytime you say it
I mentally gain apound
soon I will lose it all
who will you pick on now

Everytime I eat something
you make me feel guilty inside
as if I don't disearve to eat
I'm not more or less important than you
so why do you repeat nasty things about me
and make me feel worthless inside

You are all just so pathetic
trying to make yourselves feel good
by making me miserable
well guess what
news flash
I'm probably happier than you
so why don't you just bugger off
cause you're not worth another thought!

You (edited by Moderator) are bullies
which everyone can see
but why don't you pick on them
why do you only pick on me

my friends stand up
and tell you to stop
but all you do is laugh
and walk off

you now only try and say stuff to me
when I am all alone
so abviously your scared of my friends
is it only because you have none?

So you are just jealous
of all my friends
well it's you I feel sorry for
cause I have them

You can rant and rave
and call me names
but Im still luckier than you
because I have my mates!

[This message has been edited by Ringo (01-07-2006 10:21 AM).]

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

1 posted 2006-01-06 01:10 PM

interesting amount of pent up aggression in this one, but good point, screw materialistic people anyway... good write

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-i wrote it somewhere in time

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2006-01-07 12:15 PM

this...reminds me of me. when i first started writting. i wrote how i felt...and thats good. but you can make it better with twist...or if you tell the story in a unigue and different way. because anyone can write a story...and even make some of it rhyme...but it takes a poet to make it something you will never forget.

and it does take practice...and your doing good.

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

3 posted 2006-01-08 12:16 PM

i know exactly how u feel sadly... wish i could say youll get stronger... i hope u do but i just havent yet i decided to fix it myself

layla
Member

since 2000-11-19

Posts 74

4 posted 2006-01-16 10:59 AM

hun...I was in the same situation as you...I lost 55lbs and I feel great and you should see the looks on their faces when they saw me, all the guyz that used to pick on me suddenly were hitting on me...They are jealous of your happyness, no matter how much you weigh if you are happy some one will try to bring you down...dont let them. Keep writing...Keep strong

littlelauren
Junior Member

since 2005-12-30

Posts 25

5 posted 2006-01-16 06:25 PM

I just want everyine to know who reads this that I'm not fat!!! I keep getting this.. this isnt about me but about my best friends.. she sat and cried to me one night feeling so sad bacause of allthese girls being horrible... it really hurt me people were being like this to my amazingly gorgeous best friend.. we don't go to the same school so I can't be there for her so it's hard for me to see her this upset so I wrote it to get my feelings off my chest! thanks for your support towards her though!

XxnoraxX
Member

since 2006-01-24

Posts 122
<3 MA,,,USA <3

6 posted 2006-02-06 04:33 PM

Aww..I hope those creeps

will leave your friend alone. That poem rocks!!! I wish I could just print it and give a copy to everyone thats so stuck up. But, i know they'll prob just laugh anyways so great great great write!

XxnoraxX

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

7 posted 2006-03-07 09:28 PM

i've been where you are. Great poem

           Jessica

    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

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