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Teen Poetry #7

trying to be me again

piecesofapicture
New Member

since 2006-01-02

Posts 4

0 posted 2006-01-02 04:30 PM

here i am holding our picture in my hands
the scared little girl you always knew
i'm passing out the pieces
of my shattered heart
to anyone that'll listen to me cry
because tonight every song
screams out our names
the look in my eyes can't be hidden
i can't disguise the pain
it doesn't matter at all
you don't remember me anymore.

Lotta Lagg
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since 2006-01-02

Posts 19
Michigan

1 posted 2006-01-02 05:57 PM

Very nice. I felt your pain.
~

Lotta

"One Oneness One"

Ringo

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since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

2 posted 2006-01-02 11:10 PM

WELCOME TO PIP!!!!!!!!!

This is a very excellent write... I really look forward to reading more from you.
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Member Seraphic

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with you

3 posted 2006-01-03 12:39 PM

"because tonight every song
screams out our names
the look in my eyes can't be hidden
i can't disguise the pain
it doesn't matter at all
you don't remember me anymore."

ahha this one goes to the heart....well done!

Welcome to Pip!

Kaos
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since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

4 posted 2006-01-06 12:54 PM

very heartfelt piece, nice write... Welcome to pIp

"i said 'How bout a revelution' and he said 'Right' i said oh, you say ah, i say revelution and you say ja,That was the craziest game of poker"
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