my second submission.....Lost Love

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Teen Poetry #7

my second submission.....Lost Love

portorockfinest
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since 2005-12-13

Posts 4
NJ, United States

0 posted 2006-01-02 03:41 PM

when a love is lost
in your eyes and in your mind..everything changes
everything loses sense
the world becomes your enemy
when a love is lost
everything absolutely
absolutely everything, is in danger
when a love is lost
the rain wets your soul
and that cloud follows your steps

the blue sky changes gray from white and black
and the ocean instead of water is filled with fire
that is why you become fragil, the winds drops you
there are no words that can consule your emotions
a move of love is what you live
where the victim is you and you become depressed
it is neither a chapter without end, without commercials
where the protagonist doesnt die, he dies from being bitter

when a love is lost
the tears fall from your eyes in sequence
your pupils serve to you
as a witness that you cry for her
when a love is lost
in valentines day you feel rejected
there is no one that will love you
when a love is lost
the keys from a piano are soundless
guitars without cords
a man without veins
when you lose your love

youll see the sun without clarity,,,where science changes
where there is cold you are hot and vice versa
where parties have to meaning
on christmas you cry in a corner
there will not be paint nor color for your art
just a paper without meaning and details
and only you will understand that painter
if you dont understand just repeat the words
when you lose your love

Sexy
Member

since 2005-11-25

Posts 53

1 posted 2006-01-02 07:28 PM

Ok i really like it, but you kind of lost me in the last paragraph...

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