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Why doesn't my daddy love me?

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littlelauren
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since 12-30-2005
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0 posted 12-31-2005 04:51 AM       View Profile for littlelauren   Email littlelauren   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlelauren


Why doesn't my daddy love me?
like all my friend's dads do,
I act no different to them,
yet there daddys love them too

I love my daddy
like only a daughter could
so why doesn't my daddy love me?
like a father should

Every night
I cling on to my teddy bear
pretending it's my daddy
if I told him, would he care?

All I want is my daddy to love me
is that really too much to ask?
loving me is his duty
and shouldn't be his task

Even if my daddy doesn't love me
I will always love him
because I know living his life without me
must be very dim!
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Lotta Lagg
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since 01-02-2006
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Michigan


1 posted 01-02-2006 06:00 PM       View Profile for Lotta Lagg   Email Lotta Lagg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lotta Lagg

Wow it brought tears to me. Thanks for sharing your pain in words.
~
Lotta

"One Oneness One"

Kaos
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since 08-02-2001
Posts 320
between space and time


2 posted 01-06-2006 01:06 PM       View Profile for Kaos   Email Kaos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaos

beautiful piece. i enjoyed the read alot... it had a nice flow to the reading of it

thanks again for sharing

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-i wrote it somewhere in time

Shaddow1
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since 09-04-2006
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3 posted 09-08-2006 12:38 AM       View Profile for Shaddow1   Email Shaddow1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Shaddow1

wow I wanna cry. I kow exactly how you feel. I lost my daddy to drugs b4 I could even crawl. For about 16 years all I reall ygot from him was a birthday card once in a blue moon. He moved back to my home town about 2 yrs ago and it isnt ne better. He still does drugs and only comes round and talks to me when he asks me for something. What I hate the most is how when I say "Ilove you daddy." he reply's but with no feeling. like it's manditory for him to say it back. I wish for once I could here him say it on his own with out ne one telling him and he mean it. I would die just to hear my daddy say i love you just once to me with feeling... any way its an aswome poem and as you can tell... I can deff. relate

Britney

Love is like a Rose; it always dies - Britney Miller

nina1522
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4 posted 02-14-2009 09:27 PM       View Profile for nina1522   Email nina1522   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nina1522

i know what you mean. i was adopted by my father. my biological father didnt want me as his daughter. very touching.
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