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Teen Poetry #7

Hidin love

littlelauren
Junior Member

since 2005-12-30

Posts 25

0 posted 2005-12-30 08:15 AM

I really, really like you,
but not just as a friend
I thought that we could be togeather
and are friendship could exstend

But you did not agree
and now it's puzzling me why
why could you not accept my love?
now you're making me cry

I thought you liked me too
but obviously I was wrong
even though everyone told me you did
but I guess, they too were wrong

Well I guess I'm alright
with us being just mates
at least I'm saving money
on all of those exspensive dates

but part of me
will always love you
but I will hide it deep within
until you too can love me
cause not loving me is a sin

portorockfinest
New Member

since 2005-12-13

Posts 4
NJ, United States

1 posted 2006-01-02 03:43 PM

nice poem i loved da way u expressed ur feelings not in a difficult way but in the most simplest of ways. good job

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